Nuke & Choco

[sdm42393]

This is the first game I'm actually planning on going through with (this is like my 10th game  but... um, yea, they sucked, badly). This is pretty much a remake of one of the games I stioped making (this was the closest one I came to completion than any of the other ones).

Anyway, this game is about a black mage named Nuke and a chocoling named Choco (really creative name, right?). They go on adventures just for fun until they run into this shady character called Kurai (japanese for darkness) who planned on destroying the world because of the liars and hypocrites  who run it. Nuke and Choco deside to save the world (yea, real original and interesting, I know, shut up). I'm thinking aout details and crap right now so... I don't have much. Put any type of critisism on right now, I don't care, just tell me what you think (which you probly can't think much because what I've told you is WAY to vague and the plot seems like every other game in the universe, but hey!).

     - Steve  

[DragonBlaze]

The base idea for your game is alright, the guy wanting to destroy the world is kinda cliche, but you kinda need that in there. Just don't meet him and have him say something like "I wanna destroy the world, mwahahaha!!!" actually develope into it. Other than that, I can't really say much at all cuz like you said it was vauge.

What type of creature is choco exactly? I know you said the name, but that doesnt really help in determinin what type of creature it is.

Do you have any screens you could put up?

[sdm42393]

Um... I would give you screens but my RPG Maker is being retarded!    I kept on getting the same errors every time I either made a 6th map or went into battle, and the game just gquit. WHAT DO I DO?!

- Steve  

[Moosetroop11]

Originally posted by DragonBlaze
What type of creature is choco exactly? I know you said the name, but that doesnt really help in determinin what type of creature it is.

a chocoling named Choco

Presumably a chocoling is a chocobo. Maybe a baby chocobo?

[sdm42393]

Originally posted by Moosetroop11

Originally posted by DragonBlaze
What type of creature is choco exactly? I know you said the name, but that doesnt really help in determinin what type of creature it is.

a chocoling named Choco

Presumably a chocoling is a chocobo. Maybe a baby chocobo?[/B]

Not exactly a baby chocobo, but a pretty young one.

- Steve