My charsets.

[Bluhman]

It's okay so far, but four things you'll want to do:

1. Make the scarf bigger.
2. Shade the wings. Make them bigger as well?
3. Add a flowing bit to his scarf. I think it's actually in there, so make it a bit larger.
4. Detail his sleeves.

If you were going to do that, then great. It not, well now you know what must be done! Oh, and remember to work on that shading boy!

[Moosetroop11]

Always nice to see new spriters. Keep practicing.

[lilsniffs]

Originally posted by Bluhman
It's okay so far, but three things you'll want to do:

1. Make the scarf bigger.
2. Shade the wings. Make them bigger as well?
3. Add a flowing bit to his scarf. I think it's actually in there, so make it a bit larger.
4. Detail his sleeves.

If you were going to do that, then great. It not, well now you know what must be done! Oh, and remember to work on that shading boy!

Thats 4 things.

[Bluhman]

Originally posted by lilsniffs
Thats 4 things.

Exactly. Why did you point that out?

[lilsniffs]

Im just saying. What do you mean by a flowing bit for the scarf?


Changes:
Wing Bigger
Scarf bigger
Added shading to wing
Changed color of cape
Changed color of scarf
Added texture to wing
Changed cape shape

[A Forgotten Legend]

Instead of straight lines, make it a bit curved, not too much, but a bit.

[lilsniffs]

How? But anyway heres what I have so far with Cloud. I'll probably finish him in a week.

[lilsniffs]

OMG!!!!!!! I did Clouds sword in the wrong hand!!!!! Well, I just fixed it: