Is dis a OK plot????

[ze straw]

Like is this plot ok for a 10 year old??? Ok soooo you are Zac referd (spelled wrong) to guy... well any way there is a war going on and the guy is a lengendary warrior! The evil peeps catch you and whip out your memory! They say you were on there team wihch is da evil team lol. and then finaly they want you to hurt this one guy! But you say no and run away! And then you go on a big quest to find out if you are really evil or good..or who you are! YOu make friends along the journey but some friends have some secerts that they perfer keep hidden!

[Yellowvanblake]

yo, do you know that your first thread got moved?

 

That being said, this game idea sounds very much like the first one. But the inconsistency in your two descriptions makes it sound like you haven't thought it out very well.

You might want to get a notebook and start drawing up an outline. It could help you keep all your ideas in order. Other than that; I don't really have anything to say.

[Ben]

yeah....you didnt have to make this topic a second time dude. Maybe dont do that again.

[DragonBlaze]

I sent you a message when I moved your other topic, please read your inbox.

Please post anything game related in the games section. The rm programming section is for questions on programming stuff in rpg maker, not for posting game information. Also, instead of making two topics back to back for  game info, make one, and put the new info in your old one. If you continue to post topics related to game information in the rm programming section, they will be moved, locked, or deleted.

[Daetyrnis]

Is this a joke?

[ze straw]

lol yea sorry for some reason the first one that i did got deleted.... but yea i waz kinda makin it up as i went along... but do you have any stuff dat i should add?

[Yellowvanblake]

Only:

that you should start reading very slowly
and very, very carefully.


Your topic wasn't deleted,
it was moved.

Here is where it is: