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the main part of the story takes place in 1200 B.C)Long ago, there was a world called Rique...The only reason there were countries was because of hate of one another.Soon a bloody war broke out all over the kingdom. The reason for this war was because a man lashed out and killed a guard out of rage. All the kingdoms where at war because, at the court, one kingdom killed the king of another, and so they all found it as an excuse to declare war on each other. In the end, the war was Peasants vs. Full armies.The war didn't last long. In the end, the peasants lost. As a result, some of them were imprisoned and made work, making there lives harder.807 years latter...In his teens, young Arshes lived in a prosperous family in the U.S.. He loved his car, his mom, his dad, and his bed, and his parents are millionaires so he was rich. One night, he woke up in a strange place, far away. While trying to figure out where he was, how he got there, and how to get home, he grew a liking to a young girl named Hilda, who was a peasant in the little Isle region, who said she would help him. Arshes soon came to realization that he was in the year of 1200, a period that will change the life of him and all the inhabatints of Rique.
After figuring out that he is in another place BESIDES the U.S, AND in another time period, Arshes passes out. The Gameplay takes place after you get out of bed. Hilda is ready to Go to the king to get them to help out in finding him, and she also tells Arshes that there is a mage in the city that could help him out. Arshes agrees to take Hilda to Cantin-Burge, BUT once there, he will then just ask the king for help with Hilda's dad and then go to the mage to find away to go home. Almost half way through the Forrest, there is a barrier that keeps them from crossing. Wondering how to get around, they head back into the forest and look for another way through. (I'm not telling you how to get through, so I'm just going to pretend that I've said what happens)Once through the forest, they reach Cantin Burge. They then Head off to the king. At first He says no to the question and tells you they are to busy to go on a man hunt. But after the advisor comes up and whispers something in his ear, the king agrees to "give you permission " to look for Hilda's Dad. However, he wants you to go into the sewers and get him an ancient amulet beforehand. He also says that he will give you ONE man to help you, and that man is named Felix. Outraged, Arshes almost declines his offer, when Hilda steps in and says that we would except the offer. The king then leads you down into the sewer.(I'll not tell you how to get through the sewers, but I Might give you a walkthrough if you need one. and trust me, it is NO easy task.It took one of my friends 2 hours to figure out the lever puzzle.)As soon as you find the amulet, a super-human life form attacks you because you must not know the secret of the location of the Saint's Amulet. This Life form is Valkrye. After the battle, Valkrye figures that maybe your worthy enough for the amy. Arshes then tells her that the King wanted the amulet, and she gets worried. She tells Arshes that " You guys are going to be part of a great separation, War, and tradegy." She then tells them about the Story of the Six Rays and about the Earth, Pluto, Mars, and Jupiter Stones. Hilda then says that that is just a myth, and Valkrye throws a fit about how every thing is just a myth to people, and dissapears. Arshes then picks up the amulet and takes it to the king.The king is slightly surprised at the fact that you found the amullet, AND returned alive. He gives you permission and you are forced out of his fort. Arshes then leaves Hilda and Felix, And goes to the mage Jenova.(of course you have to do something before you can go talk to her...)He then learns something about "The First Prophecy" and then the episode ends.
Story Pending!Quote ChARACTERS:ArshesBackground-Arshes is a young boy who was taken 807 years into the past for unknown reasons.Age-14Home-U.SLikes- His car.HildaBackground-Hilda is a young girl who found Arshes in turmoil about how a ghost was attacking him. He thought the ghost was a guy in a costume. Age-13Home- Little IsleLikes- ArshesEstelleBackground-Hilda's mother, who was supposedly killed while hilda was 4.Age-???Likes-???FelixBackground-A smart-mouthed member of the army. He usually gets sent to the prison because of his comments. However, he is actually a pretty good fighter and is specially trained to sabotage enemies with poison and other status effects.Age-24Likes-Any one EXCEPT the king FeaturesA Pimp'n CMSGreat Maps (really, this time)8d movementCool message systemRm2k3 style CBSAnimated Title screenAn incredibly unique story that (trust me) has never been used beforeLARGE (incredibly) LARGE LARGE LARGE LAAAAAARRRRRRRGE WorldOld rtp...new style.AREASHere are the list of locations I have currently finished.LITTLE ISLE REGION(Abrv.= Lt.Ie)little isle region is a chain of islands that are sub-tropical in temperature. The locations in Little Isle are:GRAHL TOWN(abrv.=GRH): A desolate town now with only one family living in it. A strange darkness surrounds the area and monsters seem to pop out of the blue.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Major land features are:The Dark Road: Getting it's name from the darkness around it, it was origanly called "Isle Rove Path, leading to Isle Rove Cliff.Hilda and her father where the ones that re nammed it, because the cliff slowly eroded and fell down the mountain.Cantin Burge Forest and FieldHome to many animals and bugs, the area is covered in trees and plants. A huge river runs down the middle of the area, leading to a small water fall at the end.It is named Cantin Burge Foreset and Field because some of the area was cleared for the huge city, Cantin Burge--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------CANTIN BURGE CITY(Abrv.= CABR): A large and modern (for there period of time) city that is surrounded in a huge wall. Most of the city's stores are Mage and Magic shops.This is the location of the ruler of Little Isle.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Major land features are:Cantin Burge CastleSurrounded by guards and walls, this is the MOST GUARDED place in Little Isle.It has a throne room, Trophy room, bedroom, bath, kitchen, and other places.It's most famous one is, by so far, the sewers.Cantin Burge Castle SewersYou wonder why this is popular, right? Well the reason is because there is supposedly a lost relic hidden in some far corner. People flock to get there hopping to find it.It has lots of monsters hidden in it, and only the strong are smart enough to go there.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SCREENS NOTE: For those that like the huntes chronicles (there most likely is none) I will not work on this project (till the first demo atleast) so I swear I will finish it before this.
ChARACTERS:ArshesBackground-Arshes is a young boy who was taken 807 years into the past for unknown reasons.Age-14Home-U.SLikes- His car.HildaBackground-Hilda is a young girl who found Arshes in turmoil about how a ghost was attacking him. He thought the ghost was a guy in a costume. Age-13Home- Little IsleLikes- ArshesEstelleBackground-Hilda's mother, who was supposedly killed while hilda was 4.Age-???Likes-???FelixBackground-A smart-mouthed member of the army. He usually gets sent to the prison because of his comments. However, he is actually a pretty good fighter and is specially trained to sabotage enemies with poison and other status effects.Age-24Likes-Any one EXCEPT the king FeaturesA Pimp'n CMSGreat Maps (really, this time)8d movementCool message systemRm2k3 style CBSAnimated Title screenAn incredibly unique story that (trust me) has never been used beforeLARGE (incredibly) LARGE LARGE LARGE LAAAAAARRRRRRRGE WorldOld rtp...new style.AREASHere are the list of locations I have currently finished.LITTLE ISLE REGION(Abrv.= Lt.Ie)little isle region is a chain of islands that are sub-tropical in temperature. The locations in Little Isle are:GRAHL TOWN(abrv.=GRH): A desolate town now with only one family living in it. A strange darkness surrounds the area and monsters seem to pop out of the blue.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Major land features are:The Dark Road: Getting it's name from the darkness around it, it was origanly called "Isle Rove Path, leading to Isle Rove Cliff.Hilda and her father where the ones that re nammed it, because the cliff slowly eroded and fell down the mountain.Cantin Burge Forest and FieldHome to many animals and bugs, the area is covered in trees and plants. A huge river runs down the middle of the area, leading to a small water fall at the end.It is named Cantin Burge Foreset and Field because some of the area was cleared for the huge city, Cantin Burge--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------CANTIN BURGE CITY(Abrv.= CABR): A large and modern (for there period of time) city that is surrounded in a huge wall. Most of the city's stores are Mage and Magic shops.This is the location of the ruler of Little Isle.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Major land features are:Cantin Burge CastleSurrounded by guards and walls, this is the MOST GUARDED place in Little Isle.It has a throne room, Trophy room, bedroom, bath, kitchen, and other places.It's most famous one is, by so far, the sewers.Cantin Burge Castle SewersYou wonder why this is popular, right? Well the reason is because there is supposedly a lost relic hidden in some far corner. People flock to get there hopping to find it.It has lots of monsters hidden in it, and only the strong are smart enough to go there.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SCREENS NOTE: For those that like the huntes chronicles (there most likely is none) I will not work on this project (till the first demo atleast) so I swear I will finish it before this.
Originally posted by Dragoon de SolThis would be a lot more impressive if you did the scripting yourself, which I doubt. Problems:- War started because a single guard was assaulted. HIGHLY unlikely.- The only reasons there were countries were because they hated each other?- If the peasants fought full armies, then most of them wouldn't be imprisoned. Most of them would be dead.- Again, you stick with the same thing from yor last game. Some guy wakes up in a strange land. - Very little info on your characters.- You say you have a "Pimp'n CMS" when, in fact, it's not Pimp'n in the least...to me at least.- Great Maps? They're alright, I admit, but not great.- 8d movement? Can you move in eight dimensions?- Looking at the message system, it's not all that cool.- Looking at the battle system, what makes it like rm2k3? It looks front view to me.- Unique story? Your story is a bunch of reworded cliche's...Meaning it HAS been used before. - Where's the large world map? How do we know it's large?Stop making outrageous claims. Whether you care what I say doesn't matter. It's fact.
Originally posted by Dragoon de SolThat's part of the problem. YOU know it's unique. Because you know it all. You've given us a half-assed summary that reeks of cliches.
