"Elements"

[EightSlicesOfPie]

Alright, I AM FINISHING THIS ONE!

Four elements...fire...earth...water...air...combine them to create the greatest elemtn of all, "Life". Yes, in Dore, everything filled with life is made of fire, water, earth, and water elements.

The ones that the people of Dore now call the "Mage of Time" tried to master the elements, but always failed.

Until one person came.

His name was Nr'o, a mage of Air. Nr'o captured twenty particles of each element, and made creatures out of the particles called "dornits". Shortly after masterign the elements and dornits, Nr'o was murdered by a fellow mage, who had been his best friend...

Twelve years later, two tomb robbers, named Rokin and Damien, enter Diel Sanctum to steal a staff called the "kai staff" for an apprentice mage named O'rn to give to his master. While in the Sanctum, Rokin and Damien meet three people that will change their lives forever...

[sk8rman]

...the three people were Larry, Curly, & Moe, better known as the three stooges. but the three stooges all got bit by an evil radioactive termite. so they deformed into "the 2 1/2 stooges (during deformation, Curly lost the lower half of his body)!" *BOOM BOOM* "What was that?!" said Rokan.
"OH, NO! IT'S THE 2 & 1/2 St...AAAAAHHHHHHHGGAGGGGAGKULKNGAG!" Thats all Damian could say before the 2 1/2 stooges ate him whole...

[Fade]

Originally posted by sk8rman
...the three people were Larry, Curly, & Moe, better known as the three stooges. but the three stooges all got bit by an evil radioactive termite. so they deformed into "the 2 1/2 stooges (during deformation, Curly lost the lower half of his body)!" *BOOM BOOM* "What was that?!" said Rokan.
"OH, NO! IT'S THE 2 & 1/2 St...AAAAAHHHHHHHGGAGGGGAGKULKNGAG!" Thats all Damian could say before the 2 1/2 stooges ate him whole...

Wow..That was...um..entertaining.

[EightSlicesOfPie]

What in the bloody hell was that all about?

[Fade]

Originally posted by EightSlicesOfPie
What in the bloody hell was that all about?

Bloody hell is my catch phrase! >.<   FR4663D TIME!

[sk8rman]

What? i thought it would be a good story!

btw are u 2 british?

[EightSlicesOfPie]

Would you mind NOT spamming up my thread? If not, then you'll look like this:   Then I'll...

  Shoot you
  Frag you
  And flame you.

 

[sk8rman]

I can feel the pain already...

[Leon Sieghart]

Sk8erman, please stop spamming. Seriously, if you don't want to be banned.

I like it, EighSlices. It is a little bit of cliche, but good work anyways!

[Red Giant]

GAH!!!
NO TRIPLE GUNS!!! OR SPAMMING!!! ME NO LIKE IT!!!
.... well, I guess the guns are alright if you really feel that way... AND I'M REALLY BRITISH!!! SUCK ON THAT!!!

[sk8rman]

um*feeling a whole lot smaller* sorry...

[Fade]

Originally posted by sk8rman
um*feeling a whole lot smaller* sorry...

Skaterman gives a bad name to Canadians.
Red Giant Gives a good name to the English
And I give a good name to the Quebecers ^^

-This is my final spam -nods- -

[kAiRoU]

I like everything except the last 11 things, Dore eh...this saounds a lot like Golden Sun...or something else, lemme guess
fire-earth-wind-water-fire-ect
and dose that life thing mean if you master the elemants yuor imortal? can i give birth if i lignht a candal, thrw a rock at it, blow on it, and wet it, will a baby apear???

*sorry to be sarcastick*

[EightSlicesOfPie]

Thanks for the positive feedback, but you can take back the canned meat! So, anymore suggestions? Anyone? ANYONE?!  :p

[sk8rman]

i think that there should be the spirit of the guy that was killed & he has the staff and it turnes the robbers...it gives...okay,the staff thing malfuntions and gives the 2 guys evil powers. then the guys kill the spirit, take the rod, and try to destroy the dreamworld.