Sleeping Angel

[Red Fox]

Heres some pictures from my game..


What do you think??

[RPG LORD]

Is that all?

[Red Fox]

another one...

more tomorow i think...

[RPG LORD]

So it's just an empty game without any story? Those modern game makers are getting lamer and lamer with the minute

[Red Giant]

Originally posted by RPG LORD
So it's just an empty game without any story? Those modern game makers are getting lamer and lamer with the minute

Um, I think he just isn't explaining the story. Alot are doing that.
C'mon, Red Fox, tell us the storyline!!!

[Red Fox]

Oright but it suck I'am the worse story maker ever..

Along time ago it was a war betwen the udead and the humans.
The udead leder was an Dark Angel (was name I don't remember right now)..
The dark Angel coulden't die.
So a wizard made magical chain that could chapter the dark angel.
But befor the angel was chapted he made an diamond,The Fire Diamond.
The diamond has magic power , the power make the udead strong.
And placed it in the tempel of whel.
When the dimond is in the tempel it will make the undead stronger for evry year.
If the diamond is removed from the tempel it will lost is power.
After 5000 yers the undead have grown that strong so they could destroy the chains and free theres master.
The king of Dagger Tail send oute his best knight to take the Fire dimond from Tempel of Whel.

And thats the Story.
What do you think??
It sucks..

[RPG LORD]

Even if it sucks, I don't get it anyway

[Red Fox]

K  
But Anyway i need a name to the hero so could any1 help whit that??

[Red Fox]

What is it you don't understand??
   

[X-F3R]

lemme try to re-translate his story:

A long time ago there was a war between Humans and Undead. The leader of the Undead was a Dark Angel who couldn't die.

There was this Wizard who made a Magical chain that sealed/trapped (just guessing what he intended to say) the Dark Angel. but before that was done, the Dark angel made a Diamond called the Fire Diamond and placed it in the Temple Of Hell (Whel or Hell?). it could make the undead stronger.  the diamond which is placed in the temple makes the Undead stronger every year. After 500 years, the undead grew so strong that they could finally destroy the chains which sealed/trapped the leader (master) of the Undead, the Dark Angel. On the human side, the King of "Dagger Tail" sent out his best knight to the Temple of Whel to destroy the Fire Diamond to prevent the freeing of the Dark Angel.

first of all, the story somehow seems too plain. secondly, people write their stuff here to advertise or to seek help. RPGLord, if you've nothing better to say, then quit spamming. not only spamming but you're being mean to a new comer. remember, those "thousand" posts of yours are mainly made up of spams.

anyways, about the game, it must be better than the way you presented it. rename the Fire Diamond as the "Undead Orb" or something. the word Fire Diamond makes me feel like you're dealing with fire-elemented enemies all the way to the end. but that's your choice whether you wanna change it or not.

1 last thing.. if your english is not that fluent but if you speak;
French, German, Dutch, Italian, Spanish, Russion, Norwegian or Portuguese then go to

http://www.freetranslation.com/

type your stuff there in order to translate your stuff more accuratly. it should be easier to get than the one you posted earlier (no offence.) if anyone doesn't bother to at least try to re-arrange those words that are wrongly placed (since the site translates it by machine, not human), then i guess i'll call those guys ignorant.

X

[Red Giant]

Hmm.... although I've never seen a storyline quite like it, it seems so incredibly cliched...

[White Dwarf]

Same here

[Red Fox]

Thx X-F3R
I'am not so good at english...
And I ganna change the name of the Fire Diamond..

I can't use that side I'am from Sweden....

[Red Fox]

Wich Hero shall I use in my game this one that ghost clown made for me...

[Red Fox]

Or this I made whit the generator.