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Arcanagirl
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Lands of Lunori
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July 21, 2004, 10:18:20 PM »
This game has been in making since rpgmaker98 came out. The title has changed 7 times and the 7th time is now a month old.
Lands of Lunori:
-Brief Bio-
The story line was created when I was 12, I wrote a story as a homework assignment. Write a mythical story. I create the story and actually became intrigued by it. I got an A too. The storyline never changed, but has been revised several times since that day. I have writen over 20 different versions all on same basis, just added or changed certain things.
-Brief Storyline-
The game is about a world beyond the universe. A World beyond all the barriers and never to be found except by those that have the power to realm shift.
Mainly about several people who come together by destiny to protect the world from mass evils. Not just 1 main evil like most games. This game could actually go on like a finaly fantasy game, only the main charas are the same.
The world Lunori have 7 main lands...(which never changed in my ideas): Lumus, Claristy Gale, Tiang, Lania, Arlaya, and Harmaira.
Also including sub secret lands hidden through barriers and realm fusions...(I wont spoil!)
Lunori's main realm has guardians, those chosen by higher beings to gather and go about saving others.(Missions really)
Each chosen being is not the same, most make the chosen a certain breed, well this is about Lunori so each chosen soul is of a different background and own persona.
Main Plot, is the main hero Lilly, who starts out very confused. Her life is a constent loop of vortexs around her being. She is told nothing of her past nor her abilities. Asking her family was out of the question, for some reason she was the only one born with abilities to control Energy. Her powers are without a doubt unlimited...From Time disruption to basic energy stealing/gathering to supress her thirst for it.
A huge plot twist is later giving...I wont spoil the suprise.
At age 7 she learns the truth about her past and takes on a journey to find more about herself. She leaves her home town Liera(Also she is a Princess), with her childhood friend Kia Laurance the Rebel Princess of Cellia. On their journey they begin to find others who share a common goal.
-Charaters-
-Lillian(Lilly) Mathews: Girl with a complex past and unlimited abilities known to be the most dangerous and evil powers in Lunori. Looking for truth, she also seeks revenge, self, and justice. She is a very childlike girl with a lust for excitement. She always tends to follow danger. Lilly is kind hearted, but with a bad attitude.
-Kia Laurance: Princess of Cellia, and childhood friend to Lilly.
A seeker for something new. She is tired of being trapped by her life as a Princess and runs away from her past, only to find horrid beginnings. She is kind, with a back off kind of attitude, she hates being bossed around and told what she can and cant do. A rebel Spirit at heart, wanting her own path in life, not others.
-Camui: A mysterious man who oddly vows to protect Lilly on her journey. His persona is all about action, if there is a fight he is there. Trained in the arts of Core, one of the many sword techs. He later falls for Lilly...awwww...but does she fall for him...or maybe another..lol
-Leris Ryn: Best friend to Camui. He always tags along with Camui hoping to become a great warrior like him. He acts like a hotshot, and has a horrid lust for women!
-Cora Syliph: A Twin! Not idintical! She is a lost soul seeking guidance and acceptance by those around her. She is very shy and doesnt talk much. Lilly befriends her and trys to guid her in a good path. She also sinces Cora's Mass Energy fields...Lilly is conused how a powerless girl can emitt so much energy.
-Malin Syliph: Twin to Cora, but wiser. This chick has issues! She is very conseeded and feels the world should bow before her will. She Follows Cora when she meets Leris.
-Merric: Lost soul who forgets who he is...He was found alone in a cave.
-Ceres Nyria: A odd Mystic hoping to break a curse. She is not a happy soul either, she never has anything good to say. No one has yet to see what her curse is.
-Cursed Ceres: (no spoils) what her curse is!
-Cytin Arcadian: I cant say, it will spoil the game!
-Seric Arcadian: I cant tell...No spoils here!
-Game ideas-
-50 different classes, with over 300 different skills.
-Each character has 2 skillsets, their powers and class powers.
-Lunoris own Calander..there are 324 days in a year, 72 hours in a day.(3 days on Earth is a day on Lunori)
-13 Months in a year! I made names for each month too...and how many days each month has!
-5 Realms, Lunori has 5 realms to it...
-Missions of the Guardians...Over 100 missions..not all needed to be complete to beat game.
-7 Different races on Lunori
-??? Mini Games (not sure yet)-spoiler 1 only: Love meters! :O
-Town creating! (Script not made, but I will make it!!!!)
-??? Different story routs...why just follow as it was made..why not have different ways to beat the game...Yeah!!!
-Character Killing...Hey, if you kill you party member they stay dead! not battle dead, I mean if they get into a rut, you can help or leave them to die...your choice...be warned, you cant revive them if you do!
-Over 600 items/weapons/armor/etc...
-A hell of a lot more! I worte a lot all ready...lol
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SonicChaos7
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July 21, 2004, 10:28:08 PM »
I like your ideas. The story is kinda cliched however. Lilly is somewhat like Terra from FF6. I have more to say, but my eyes are getting all fuzzy. But as of right now, I like how it stands.
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Arcanagirl
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July 21, 2004, 10:31:49 PM »
You would be suprised that Lilly is far from Terra...Humm I never thought of that..they actually have a similar outlook...I just cant give out her secrets...spoiler if I did...
I figured out the beginning though..she starts at age 7 and disobeys her father by going into the hidden chambers...Where her life changes forever...
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July 21, 2004, 10:31:52 PM »
Will ya use RPG maker?
or toolkit2?
(toolkit2 is better just for the power)
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Arcanagirl
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July 21, 2004, 10:45:22 PM »
I use rpgmaker 2003...I didnt like toolkit.
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July 21, 2004, 10:48:02 PM »
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Originally posted by Arcanagirl
Camui...
Makes Allen think about Camui Gackt...fun music...but that's beside this topics point...
I really like how the world has it's own calander, and that one of their days is three of ours..(I would die of boredom probably with days that long..o_o).
It seems that a lot of the ideas are pretty solid, and the characters seem pretty interesting.
For some reason Allen kept thinking about Star Ocean: the second story for some reason when I was reading over all of the information you posted...*thinks*..strange..
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Arcanagirl
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July 21, 2004, 11:35:36 PM »
Well most of my ideas are revised through different games...So many would say taht is a rip, but it isnt really..ideas taken and changed into my own...Except the love meter...that sprouted from several games really...SO2-Azure Dreams-FF7-few others...
Similar to Star Ocean, but way new...
You cant choice to interact like in SO2...press a button and interact...when ever you enter a town. your Party members are already split up...I mean in real life, since when does everyone agree, hey lets all look around together? So I figured it is like a trip to something new, everyone just says, meet you back here!
Mainly how I got my idea, real life. You can interact better then in SO2, I still have yet to get deis to interact with anyone...plus it is harder to get certain interactions..Well mine is, there are always interactions...I will make sure there are so many you cant get them all or even at end of game, you could still have over 100 interactions to go...
There is only 1 ending though, but how you play the game to get to the end makes the difference.
this is an example based on my game..but isnt in the game:
Lets say Kia asked you to return to her home so she could take out her family or something...This isnt really a role in the game..it plays a part, but can be skipped...If you dont, you wont know how the storyline plays from that part...Each action you complete for a person, changes how the party is toward you...Or it could damage the party...For example you can kill yuor party members by fault.. Example not in game!: Lets say Camui and Leris went out hunting, they were gone for few hours and Lilly or other party member worried...You can either wait it out by resting, or going after them...If you go after them you could save Camui or Leris from dying...if you dont go...One of the members could be killed...
Your choices in the game determine the rout to reach the end.makes the game more exciting really.
Another example...You choice not to help an old man who fell down...Your rank in the town would fall, and people wouldnt be so nice to you anymore.
Oh I forgot to add! My game also has day to night timer!!! I might add date timer too...So if you read a calander or something it will display the day and month...wow I am in for a hell of scripting!
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July 21, 2004, 11:41:10 PM »
Sounds neat. I'm too lazy to really go through all that coding and my game doesn't necessarily need it anyway. To make all that work, you MUST know how to use variables. But I'm sure you know how, so it shouldn't be too much of a problem.
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Arcanagirl
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July 21, 2004, 11:44:13 PM »
Well Not really, a little...
I hosted my own Ultima ONline shard...varibles are easier on hand made work...but rpgmaker2003 is sorta limited in cans and cants..unless you find scripts around..but I am not bright...
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July 21, 2004, 11:46:53 PM »
I could always help you (just hope you don't catch me on one of my lazy days) with that stuff. Just give me an sn for whatever IM service you use and I could help you whenever you need the help.
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Arcanagirl
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July 22, 2004, 12:14:13 AM »
wow..I never had anyone want to help me make my game before...I normally just go solo...Sounds exciting...
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July 22, 2004, 12:31:00 AM »
THe only thing i have to say is that you should be careful when using stories originally made when you were a child. The reason is that these stories are cliche. Revisions can help a little, but it will still probably be cliche. This is not always the case though.
Anyway good luck!
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July 22, 2004, 12:35:20 AM »
the hardest part of making a game is making the beginning and the ending
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July 22, 2004, 12:57:39 AM »
Ouch, sounds like alot to make.
Then again, I've yet to dip into any of the RMs, just never got around to it... sounds freaky but oh well, thats me.. I look at everything in terms of the toolkit2 - MUCH more freedom then RM im told, which is my style...
Anywho, sounds like a really good game. But a few questions out of curiosity:
1.What will the races be? (A game without a black mage race is like a game without graphics
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2.How are these realms connected? Some sort of gateway system or transit? And also, will it be all centralized so you can go from any one realm to any other, or like Mario RPG where you have to go through one to get to another?
3.So each character will have their abilities as well as their class ones... will there be crosovers or permabilities (ALA FF5j or FFT)? Also do their looks change according to class?
4.How will your actions affect the town's attitude? Like, just their text responses or will they refuse service? And will their attitude affect situations, like missions or story events and how you go about them?
5.More of a suggestion, but PLEASE add in some way to check for optimum equipment, or whether its better or not. I've seen many games that don't tell you until it's bought and waste's your money.
I will DEFINATELY play this whenever you release any sort of demo. Sounds great.
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Arcanagirl
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July 22, 2004, 01:59:32 AM »
1: The races are not like classes...black mages are classes more than a race...
Lunori doesnt use term races either...all refer to as beings on Lunori...
-Lumies, Serians, Fays, Mystics, Lumie Elfs, Mortals, Corlithians
-Lumies are one of the most feared on Lunori along with Serians, but are very gentle beings.Due to their abilities in energy works and control of all things possible...They have no limits to their abilities...They could even destroy a beings soul without even touching them or looking at them. Most other beings hate and want to wipe them out.
-Serians are like Lumies, but also like vampires..only they lust for energy and souls...almost like soulreaver..but much different. lust for the soul doesnt mean taking it or anyhting, more of...well hard to explain. Serians are very aggressive beings and avoid contact with other beings. They are hardly seen, unless they want to be seen. Cave dwellers more or less...living undergound in a barrier.
No other being likes Serians either, but dont go after them knowing Serians wont hesitate to kill unlike the Lumies.
-Fays: Another word for Faeries. Fays are more shy creatures and are never seen by most other beings...They are friendly to an extent, and sometimes cause problems with others on purpose. They tend to converse more with Lumies than any other being.
-Mystics: Beings able to control Elements and Time. They are in the 3rd realm...
-Lumie Elfs are hybreds...a mixed breed of lumie and a Serian.
There is a story behind how it happened, and who was the first born...But that is a spoiler..so sadly I cant give much info on it.
-Mortals I hope I dont have to explain this...They can use magics, but too careless with their lives to try. In Lunori it is rare to see a Mortal use abilities besides weapon skills.
-Corlithians, the beings that vanished centries ago...no one has ever seen them or located their where abouts...I cant give info on them..spoiler!
2: The Realms are all around Lunori...There are ways to get there and back throughout the entire game. So yes, you can travel to them when you like...There is different items that warp you through the realms -- "Realm Shifter"
3: Yes, their looks will change outside battle only for now...I havent exatly best ability in battleset making..so until I do or get someone to help me...not in battle..but I do want them to be viewed in diff classes in battle...The class skills stay with the class, but once you learn a skill it is locked for rest of game. I dont like the idea of mastering all classes and having the class skill command filled with over 300 skills...
4: Yes to all of those...How you treat the towns people effects your status with them...If you are horrible to a few people...you just get bad responses from them...If you are constently bad to them...the whole town will hate you and if consitant...you cant enter the town until you do something nice.
5:In rpgmaker2003 the system has buttons that show if the equipment is stronger or worse or equal to current.
Oh and the preious person...my childhood dream game is always changing something in it...But I make sure it is nothing like other games...I really am looking for a game that is opposite but has similar battles or something...
I change things in my game based on other games...if a game has a limit on something...I change my game to have no limit on something.My game is more of a game I would love to play...something never made yet.
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