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[Osmose]

The stick animations are all pretty much the same moves in different order. Try making them with flash, or at least more fluid.

The comics, however. Are getting a LITTLE better. For one, your speeck bubbles need a little triangle pointing out from them so we know who's talking. Best wat to do this is make it in a seperate window and then copy-paste it with transparency on so that you can move it around a bit.

Also, work on your grammar. Even if you don't normally type well, it's a good habit and will make the comic work better.

Some parts are awkward, like the orb going into him. Sacraficing a frame or two from the fight scene to go to showing the orb merging with him and him saying "Argh! What.... is.. ha... happening t-to me?!" And then having Mikado appear explaining it would've worked. Also, Mikado's text there was kinda leaking out, make sure text isn't doing that.

The frame after that is a good example of the grammar thing. "The orb obsorbs you and gives you a certain type power. In this case the blue orb gives you speed, which it seems you don't really need it." Let's see how much better that sounds with a re-typing:

"Once a fighter obtains an orb, he absorbs it into his body, thereby gaining the power specific to that orb. The Blue Orb is the orb of speed, but because you already are fast, you will gain little from absorbing it."

I think it's better that way.

Also the chainsaw on the badguy went transparent in frame three.

And finally, at the beginning you act like there was a huge massacre. Try to make it a little more obvious than some blood streaks on the floor that are part of the setting. A few dead bodies would've been good.

[Mikado]

thank you for the critisims, i will look over it again to make sure i got everything right, and.....yea so umm thanks again.

[Mikado]

the next comic is well on its way and i'm also starting a new series (i din't abandone the other one!) mr.t vs ryu! i shall post it tomarrow or later today!

[Mikado]

i've decided to post it today! here it is!

[Osmose]

For some reason no one mentioned this, but there's an edit button for a reason.

MR.T VS RYU?!?!?!?!?!?!

You are a genius.

[Mikado]

lol....umm...o yea lol i forgot that button was there! and i decided to make a quick continuation of the ryu vs mr. t

[Mikado]

i've decided to make another funny continuation to ryu vs mr. t enjoy and gimme critisims dammit!

[Mikado]

here is a third quick continuation and i'm trying to fuse the mikado character with the rookie assassin (from my other comic series!) i dunno to me it looks kinda gay but here is a proto type and another ryu vs mr.t continuation! enjoy bizaaaaatches!

[Mikado]

man! u guys r sad man! i begging for some critisisims! *goes on his knees and begs* please need critisisms to survive! anyway i continued ryu vs mr. t

[Osmose]

You obviously don't know what the edit button is. Stop quadruple posting and just edit all the new comics into your last post until someone replies. And stop saying "GIMME CRITICISMS!" Criticism*no s* is not something you just hand out to make your comic better. YOU have to work to make it better yourself.

[Mikado]

am how am i suppose to do that when i don't know what the problem is? the creators work will always love his/her comics so ofcorse i'm not gonna critisise badly on my own work! thats pointless! so thats where you come in! and here's three and final comic continuations of ryu vs mr. t! enjoy biznaaaatches!

[Mikado]

any critisism? at all?

[Red Giant]

Your more recent comics are better, because at least they have comedic value. Goodums.

[Mikado]

thank you! thats what I was aiming for in that short comic series! but unfortunatly that is the last of the comediac values, I'm going back to action

[Mikado]