Carpe Diem: The Living Flame

[Linkforce]

As some of you know, I posted a while ago, a thread with the same title about my game.  I gave alot of information, but not alot of people responded.  So I am here today to make a new thread not just about my Characters or my  Story , but also about some events in my game, screenshots, and very soon, the opening video to my game!  I will constantly be updating this thread with new information almost every day.  I would appreciate it if whoever replies, would only reply for any questions, comments, or ideas about my game.  (Please don't point out my mistakes too.  It makes it seem like all you care about is mistakes and not the actual thread.)

By event, I mean a point in my game.  Ex.-A building blowing up.(You get it.)  So here they are.

 Skylar Lancaster (Blonde haired character)
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Weapon: Sword
Description/Story: Skylar is the main character of this tale.  At the start of the game, he is an "elite" well trained soldier of the Western Resistance.  He boasts in his amazing sword skills, but lacks in his ability to stand up for himself.

 Haru Linaf (Silver haired character)
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Weapon: Double Sword
Description/Story: Haru is Second in Command of the Western Reistance.  He is of the few in the world who can wield two blades, and still have the speed and agility as if he were holding nothing.  He is very determined and wont stop until he has reached his goal.  Although this is very good, it also makes him somewhat arrogant of his own power. (Foreshadowing?)

 Draight Zaff (Gray long-haired character)
Age: 61
Sex: Male
Weapon: Gun
Description/Story: Draight is an extremely talented pilot.  On both land and sea, there is nobody better.  He is very warm-hearted and is always in the mood to help.  Just by looking at his face, you can see the many stories of his adventures.

 Serra Valentine
Age: 15
Sex: Female
Weapon: Bow and Arrow
Description/Story: Serra is half human-half bird.  Living off of the land, she has adapted great athletic and archer skills.  Extremely adapted to the land, she is a great navigator.


As for the story, that will be posted later.  As well for screenshots because I just started making maps.  The video will be posted once it is finished so stay posted.  If you like it so far please tell me.  

Thank you!

P.S.- I need help with poses so all who want to help with anything at all,  feel free to PM me.

plz tell me what you think.

[Linkforce]

an early place that you go

plz tell me what you think.

[ENDLESSHEARTX]

Your game looks like it's pretty cool. You should show a screenshot of what it is like in the battles. Good job so far though.

[Linkforce]

thank you!  but i dont have any battlechars yet though so yea... but i will once i get them

answer to below:
okay,  can i see some you've done?

[ENDLESSHEARTX]

I think I might be able to help you with your Charasets if you want. I've made a few myself. There okay, I'm not sure if I can do much with poses for the Charas though.

[Eternal Newb]

In your first screen that character set doesn't match really with the character talking...
In your second screen your map looks kinda empty...try to decorate a little

[ENDLESSHEARTX]

Originally posted by Eternal Newb
In your first screen that character set doesn't match really with the character talking...
In your second screen your map looks kinda empty...try to decorate a little

It probably is early in the game when the main character is a knight or something and later becomes a rebel, but I don't really know I'm just guessing...

[Linkforce]

yes.  ENDLESSHEARTX you're exactly right.  

here is a fixed screenshot of the first screenshot.

[Eternal Newb]

try to make your games a realistic a possible.
right now you could edit the character set to make her close her eyes like some sorta oracle

[Linkforce]

well, im still in the process of getting resources.  so this is not the final product.  i still have a long ways to go.  im just trying to give the people something to look at.

[Eternal Newb]

I would really just worry about my database at this point if I were you...

BTW...which maker are you using?

[Linkforce]

2003.  why?

and also she is an oracle.  and the map is plain because the main character is in another dimension.  where nothing exists.  dont just criticize w/o knowing the backround behind the shot.

[Eternal Newb]

I was talking about your second one...

don't get mad now

[Linkforce]

Okay.  I believe that my story is very hard to tell about.  There are way too many lessons, events and things you have to see to understand.  With that said, I'll explain the basic plot.  i'll explain details later.

Basically, my story is about a guy named Skylar.  He is in an rebellion called the Western Resistance.  A few years ago, the Western king died, and his younger brother took over.  Ever since then, the western continent became chaotic.  The king, for some reason, wants to start a war.  Although the people of the world think it is for power, there is more going on than what the eye sees.

(More to come soon)

[dragoninja]

Yo link, Nice working on the game!

I have a question that I never bothered to ask... what did you need my charset for anyways???