Carpe Diem: The Living Flame

[SonicChaos7]

You need more detail. Just slapping on a  tree here or there doesn't really cut it. You need to add realism. Trees will not be conveniently set up into a square sector, even if we wished it. Add some curvature to the tree cluster. Also, if this map is meant to have lots of mud/dirt, at least add some life to the grass. Give the grass flowers and stuff. Also... the waterfall looks very out of place.

[Linkforce]

k, ill spruce it up and ill repost it and you tellme what you think.  oh and btw, the reason that all the trees are  lined up like that, is because it is a manipulated forest.  it is basically being controlled byy an evil force.  but yeah, thanks for the advice!

[Linkforce]

k.  heres my spruced upforest.  i kinda changed the whole layout.  please tell me what you think...

[DragonBlaze]

Thats a lot better  

Try adding some wild life and layering the tops of the trees. I see trees being layered with that tileset in a lot of good games, I attached a screen I whipped up in a few minutes to show you what I mean  

You don't have the change the layout at all to layer the trees, and it can be done rather quickly.

[dragoninja]

Looks good...

[Linkforce]

Yay!  Time for another character!  lol.
Okay now this is the first evil character in my game.


Name: Cire (Pronounced Sire)
Sex: Male
Age: 44
Weapon: Spear
Bio/Story: Cire is the youger brother of Volan, the former King of the Western Continent.  He took his brothers throne as soon as Volan had been killed.  Imediatly starting a war between the four great continents, he is responsible for the chaos in the Wetern Continent. He keeps everything to himself.  His true intentions are unknown.  

[MariaMS]

Your game looks very interesting. I'll be waiting for a demo ^^

[Linkforce]

this is to those who follow my game.  starting friday, ill be working triple shift on my game in order to release a demo soon.  if all goes well, i should expect to release a demo in two to three weeks!  

[blackskullwarlock]

Good, I'm looking forward to your demo...

[dragoninja]

woo, 2-3weeks... I'll be sitting glued on my chair and wait for it.

[Linkforce]

Here are four shots of each Kingdom in my game...  thanks to Ace of Spades for the map layout!  

[Linkforce]

Although i have posted characters and story, i haven't really said what the point of the game is... so HERE IT IS!!

 Plot : Okay, in this game there are 7 Soul flames; relics from the past that were combined to create an immense and unstoppable power.  In the past, 7 heroes went on a long and perilous journey to find them and defeat the evil that threatned thier land.  When they found them, the united the Flames and were granted immense power......but for a price.  Their bodies became one, and they were forced to stay that way for all eternity.  (Fate plays a cruel hand as we all know)  So after defeating the evil, the Legendary hero dissapeared, and the 7 Soul Flames seperated and were flung to the far corners of the world.  But instead of all them seperating, one was left behind and dissapeared along with the hero.  Now, almost 200 years later, all of the Soul Flames have been found, and are kept in Tombs (not real name).  Only those worthy of their power can face a Soul Flame.  
Now, a great evil is beggining to loom from the shadows.  But with a Soul Flame misiing, how will you defeat it?  You must aquire each one, and along the way, learn of the past, so that you can find out how to resurect the remaining Soul Flame.... if it is even possible.  

Well, thats basically it.  Please tell me what you think!  

[dragoninja]

Sounds cool... makes me wanna try the demo even more

[blackskullwarlock]

The maps looks nice...except for maybe the overload of town around the castle...

[chocobomaster09]

wow looks good, keep up the good work!
cant wait for the demo!!!