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Bluhman
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Reply #15 on:
February 27, 2006, 10:13:14 PM »
Well, You have spelling issues.
But before I begin that, I'll have to tell you; your characters seem to be devoid of any life or something, seeing as how, as far as I can tell, every character was speaking in no expression. So, I'll tell you how to fix that. Here are a few ways to emphasize mood in dialogue:
"I'm happy! Yay!"
"No... NOOOOOOOOOooo...!!!"
"AGH! FIRE!! FIRE!!! GET THE WATERRRRRrrrrrrrrrrr...."
"... ... ...Shut up. Please."
"I... ... Um... ... ... Like."
Anyway, here's a few trends I noticed:
"Yes. Let's go back to the LIAR!!!"
Did you mean "LAIR?" 'Cause that makes more sense.
"I will REVENGE your death."
You mean AVENGE. Revenge is a noun, as in "I got revenge," And Avenge is a verb, as in "I'm going to avenge."
"RISE, ME MINIONS!!!"
Is that wizard a pirate?
Anyway, As I hacked through the first 5 battles of the game, all of which, were extremely tedious and boring, not too dificult, I noticed that your maps lacked detail, and... Um... ... ... Shape. Keep working, This game could work out.... Somehow...
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neb87
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Reply #16 on:
February 28, 2006, 12:51:51 AM »
Thanx for commonts and if there are any other bugs please post so i can fix. So how was the music, sound!
Once again thanx for playing the first version i will need to add some can of extra fighting techinqes (NO MAGIC, accept for Dark Lord's) any suggestion's!
and post spelling/grammer errors of you see them!
-Fixed LIAR errors to LAIR
-Fixed Revenge to Avenge
How does the village work i will probably keep it as is!
How does the wizrd look like a pirate and the intro was easy just heal and attack
Is the LAIR Blend or the eastern castle(probably both)
Here is a update off a map
Does anybody have any good overlays to go with this map?
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nutter
you want some this EH EH
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Reply #17 on:
February 28, 2006, 08:17:12 PM »
er sorry havent been on for a bit cause of school
nvm that i cant seem to download it, it says the is no link ...
plz help
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March 01, 2006, 12:46:35 AM »
Overlay Request.
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March 01, 2006, 12:47:03 AM »
have to make a new link old one experied!
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