Rise of the Phoenix

[Meiscool-2]

I compile most of them myself.

[Yhtomitsu]

wow your really good how long have you been doing this and are u a natural or did it take time to develope this skill at mapping

[Meiscool-2]

I think I've been doing this for 2.5 years. It mostly came naturally, but it did take some practise. I get better and better every map I make.

Now, if you want to ask more questions, save them for PMs, unless you don't mind your game's thread being overcome with off-topic posts.

[Yhtomitsu]

ok ive given the place a bit of a make over and tell me what u think now

[drenrin2120]

ehh... I think you're trying too hard. You've combined a few chipsets that simply don't match. Plus, it's too open and the rooms seem a little small and the house a weird design. When makingm aps you've got to think about a few things, what looks good for an RPG, what works, and what's realistic or atleast believable.

[Meiscool-2]

The walls are to low. Raise them up a little.

Also, take a look at mine. The rooms are not square persay, but they also arn't completly oddified. They have a realistic house look to them.

Second, make sure to set the bed's top against the wall. The way you have it now. it looks like the bed is one tile away from the wall. So just move the beds up one tile.

[Yhtomitsu]

finally i got a basic demo i know the intro sucks i need to fixs that just tell me what you think and please dont be too harsh this is my first game


http://www.uploading.com/files/Y8NKFN4J/Rise_of_the_Phoenix.rar.html

[Yhtomitsu]

ok ive finally finished with the main characters here they are:

Name: Timbo
Age: 19
Race: Human
Weapon(s): Claymore
Side: Good
biography: One of the three main characters in rise of the pheonix. He always believes in doing right by the law. He's the king of Creatonius's personal soldier. he was trained as a soldier from a very young age.



Name: Shadow
Age: 18
Race: Dragon/ Human
Weapon(s): 2 Long Swords
Side: Evil
Biography: Shadow is the Prince of the evil Arcania. His twisted soul reeks havoc where ever he goes but there is a good side to this person he was once good but after gainign the power of the mighty black dragon he has no longer had control of himself.



Name: Toxic
Age: 23
Race: Dwarf/ Human
Weapon(s): Spear
Side: Neutral
Biography: Toxic was born after a human got drunk and made love to a dwarf. Therefore he was a mistake. He was never mean't to exsist. He grew up with the abilities of both the human and the dwarf. Therefore he was tall, had the strength of a dwarf, could you magic like humans and had a keen eye for power and treasure.



I've also added a few new features to go my game

* A new intro the last one sucked as you can see from the demo.
* The choice of 3 characters to play from each with there own side to the story
* 6 different endings
* secret ending and a sercret character to be unlocked
*interactive Dungeons


coming soon:
*movies

[Yhtomitsu]

i got some screen shots from the game:









tell me what you like or dislike about them ok thanks

[drenrin2120]

Hm... never noticed the little demo there, I'll give it a go.

EDIT: It appears there server is busy.

[SilverBlade]

1st screen: I don't know, I don't realy like the houses. They're all squares, try to make them in different sizes.

2nd screen: That's actually pretty good! Nice mapping!

3rd screen: Again, it's realy not bad, actualy good. Nice chipset. One comment: the water is to straight.

4th screen: Looks good!

[Yhtomitsu]

alright thanks for the feedback be warned the demo is really bad i made the demo ages ago and never posted and lots have changed since then

[drenrin2120]

Okay, I guess it's a good thing then that the server was too busy.

[Daetyrnis]

For the third screenshot, why are there trees in the water?

[Yhtomitsu]

hmm i dont know it looked good at the time hang on ill fix it