Rise of the Phoenix

[SilverBlade]

Originally posted by Yhtomitsu
hmm i dont know it looked good at the time hang on ill fix it

Nooo! Don't! I like it, I have the same chipset and I put trees above the water too! It fills up the area and looks great!
You can say that the leaves are from trees from the other side of the river or something like that...

[Yhtomitsu]

im gonna go away from charas for a while to work solidly on my game so yeah no-one will miss me so yeah laters

[Meiscool-2]

 

[Dominicy]

please bring a .zip demo as a souvenire (sp?) when you come back.  

[Yhtomitsu]

my latest demo for rise of the pheonix most of the first part f the story is done. the dialogue isnt finished waiting for my friend to finish it and the title and the choosing the characters you can only play as one at the moment but anyway have fun tell me what you think and remember its only a demo

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HVYX5FHY

[Yhtomitsu]

added a few new characters and more to the story. New Characters:

Matt - Thief
Aged about 12 shadows little brother a really funny character in the game there for some comedy and he loves to steal things uses a dagger.

Cain - Paladin
Aged about 32. One of Creatonius soldiers aids Timbo(needs a new name if you can think of one tell me) in his quest

Darius - Paladin
Aged about 21. Cain partner and one of Timbos closest friends. He goes on the journey with timbo.

Doug - High Mage
Aged about 19. King of Rasanok known for his extremely high elemental power.

Laurican - Thunder Mage
Aged 17. A thunder mage that trains in rasanok. one of dougs elite gaurds.

Scanes - Fire Mage
Aged 18, A fire mage loves to burn things. pyromaniac. Hates Ice.

Dunno - Ice Mage
Aged 18.Scanes Twin, A twin but the opposite a Ice mage and a skilled one at that. Hates Scanes and Fire.

So yeah there is a few new charcters. im adding more every day and making more of my game every day so yeah. I should have a new demo out soon with about half the game in it. in about or week or so im getting the dialogue done and there is gonna be two versions of the game one with voices and one without so you can have your choice well ill add more later.

[Moosetroop11]

Originally posted by Yhtomitsu
the dialogue isnt finished waiting for my friend to finish it

Ooh, bad move :p Teamwork in rpgmaking is generally a recipe for disaster XD

[Yhtomitsu]

yeah but hes working on it right now and hes one of my friends from school so yeah its gonna be ok i think we've been talking about this game and working on it for a real long time but since getting rpgmaker ive actually been able to make it.

[Shaddox]

wow your game sounds great I played the demo and it was good too

[Yhtomitsu]

thanks ill be realesing the next demo soon dont have a realese date yet but theres a lot more been added to the game since last time

[Yhtomitsu]

my latest screens

[Dragonium]

Your first two screens are pretty good, I like them.

The second two aren't so great. There's far too much open space at the side of that strip of carpet, and it looks bad. Try filling it with other walls and rooms.

Also, save your screenshots as .PNGs to prevent loss of quality.

[Yhtomitsu]

yeah im not that good at mapping thats why im trying to improve yeah thanks for the comment ill try and fix them up and ill post some new ones later

[Phayre]

Also, the corners of the wall don't blend with the floor. Maybe edit the corner tiles to be transparent and 2nd layer, or just change the floor tile there.
Otherwise, good, except the girl needs at least one question mark after the "WHAT HAPPENED TO MY CAT" thing.
I still love your battlechars, and dearly wish you'd been taking requests before I made my own. *sob*

[Yhtomitsu]

hows this