Eternal Legacy~The Fourth Prophecy

[coasterkrazy]

All literature is rooted in literature.

[Jaarroho]

Originally posted by Bluhman

Originally posted by Dragoon de Sol
That's part of the problem. YOU know it's unique. Because you know it all. You've given us a half-assed summary that reeks of cliches.

Yeah, watch him release a demo and you're going to be just flat out blown away by the storyline or something.  :p [/B]

@ dragoon de sol
Well, If I gave away one thing, you would get all the spoilers needed to ruin a perfectly fine game. Would you like to know that Arshes almost kills Hilda? (not telling how or why) How about that one of the main heroes you'll probably like dies? How about the final boss? Or the continuity of part2/book2/season2?

@ Bluhman
Are you being sarcastic or true? Because if you really think that, thanks a lot!

@ gramar
If you look correctly, it's "huh? Where am I?" not "huh? were am i?"
Not saying I shouldn't correct the first part...actually the only thing keeping the demo is the spell checking.

Originally posted by coasterkrazy
[ Although its RTP, most things still are for RMXP.[/B]

Hey, thanks for the comment. But one thing I want you guys to know is that the reason I used RTP was because I wanted to make a game that the makers of XP (Enterbrain) wanted us to. So all I really have done for sprites was find some pretty cool new style sprites and use them. I have done minimal editing to the basics because of that reason. ( I do have to say, I couldn't resist the scripts...)

[Dragoon de Sol]

Okay, all that stuff is cliche too.

[True Evil]

Originally posted by Dragoon de Sol
Last story to blow me away was Final Fantasy 9. Hasn't happened since.

Not to mention his only dialogue screen says "huh? were am i?" When it should say. "Huh? Where am I?"

Try the Legacy of Kain series ^_^

[Jaarroho]

Originally posted by Dragoon de Sol
Okay, all that stuff is cliche too.

*sigh* Is there anything not Cliche? I can't tell you everything, because I don't want a spoiler.  And of course it will be a little cliche, but still.

[True Evil]

Seriously, everything has been done before in a game...

Except for an evil-cross-dressing-clown- oh wait...

[Greeb]

The Way is not cliche.By no means.Play it and you'll climax.Trust me.

[Jaarroho]

Ok, I've added All my data to the main post and deleted my old posts.

and could some of you that have played it comment? I Need to know what I've done right or wrong so that I could fix it in my next episodes.

[Jaarroho]

Man, Haven't been here for a L O N G time. (cause I was busy)

anyway, I would just like you to know that The demo has a glitch. After the part were you go home, and you see the ransom note, you can't continue...hehe.

ANYWAY, I have ep. 2 done and finish! Huzah.

I can't upload a demo at the mometn, but would some screens work?

 

yah! First Boss!

 

Top secret Evil Plan...

 

First 11 map dungeon!

Hope that wets your whistles.

Anyway, comment on my game's story, request more info, Or just ASK me stuff. I NEED your comments to know what I'm doing wrong!

Anyway, Happy new year,
Jaarroho

[Ben]

im not gonna lie to you.

You have not captured my intrest.
This game seems pretty run of the mill.

You are gonna have to beef up the graphics end of things...
the scripting sounds slapped together...
The maps look pretty  thrown together.



I would try this is it seemed a bit more.... unique.


Its like you are trying to cover up the XP defaults with minor tweaks, and it looks like these minor tweaks could be painful to your project.

Could could stand to keep certain default systems of gameplay, for familiarities sake, While finding some less default graphics.

A Culinary addage comes to mind here...

"Please the eye and the mouth will follow"

And it applies to game making in many ways. You have not pleased my eye...And despite the fact that ive not tasted this...it just looks like your thrown too much seasoning salt in there, when you should have just bought some truffle oil.

[Vidian]

Originally posted by coasterkrazy
New Meiscool in town, huh?

Omg I was thinking the same thing, Then I scrolled down and Bam.

It seems he's just trying to Criticize whatever he can.

I hope he stops..
I just don't have enough energy for another Meis.

Though I sorta Have a Crush on the First one

*Oh God... The Message is Trapped in A Box...
Oh well, I'm sure it'll fix itself In Due Time

MT11: Fixed. It's been a while since that thing reared it's ugly quotey head.

[lonewolf]

i got a copy of it to day
i play it when i get home
as working my feet are icey
my boot are like iced over
it xp no way
i have see my xp maker will work

[Jaarroho]

@Gemini
Ugh. About the default rpgxp defults, I've told EVERYONE...

I'm trying to make a game with as few changes in the system as possible, to try and make a game that Enterbrain WANTEd us to make.

As for my graphics and mapping...

Guys...Sheesh. Ive already TOLD YOU that I'm HAPPY with my battlers and maps!!!! I'm also HAPPY WITH MY STORY, AND YOU CAN NOT MAKE ME CHANGE THESE THINGS. IF SOMEONE LIKES SOMTHING,  Do not make them change it!!!! That is like this:

Person 1"Awsome! I've got a 99% on my test!!!"

Person 2"Phhhhhtb!!!" "I got a 100!!! Your sooo stupid and i'm better then you!"

Littarly. That's what it feels like. And I'm not changing those things.

When I ment tell me what I could improve, I ment such as help on my story and what I should add to make it better.
Not change everything I like about it and make it into something else. That's also like taking someone's own and turning into the other persons!

Get the picture?




Anyway, I have included an update about the story...the story section now includes Episode 2's story.

Hehe...and why are three posts in a row in Vidian's message box?

[Ben]

Dont get bent out of shape because i critiqued your game.

Im pretty sure enterbrain wanted us to have fun with things....yep


Im just saying...the tweaks youve made are painful for me to look at. You maps are boring to view.
I would not spend the time downloading it.


Take it how you want dude. It just looks like its crappier than the effort youve put into it is all

[Jaarroho]

Well, Sorry if that comment sounded negative. I know it was just a Critique, But I just...Kind of like to argue.
And about the "Don't tell people to change things they like", That wasn't necessarily pointed at you. I was meaning it to be for everyone that does that.  
And thanks for your comments, I like the fact that (finaly) some people are giving me their opinions!

And yah, my mapping isn't the best, but It isn't something I focus on, and the sewer tileset doesn't really give you much to work with...